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		<title>The Limits of Memorized Answers</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 26 Mar 2010 03:40:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Many of our clients want to have a list of memorized answers for the Speaking and Writing sections of the iBT. They believe that if they memorize 100 answers that are general enough, then those 100 answers will apply to any question they get on the test.
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Many of our clients want to have a list of memorized answers for the Speaking and Writing sections of the iBT. They believe that if they memorize 100 answers that are general enough, then those 100 answers will apply to any question they get on the test.</p>
<p>Although Strictly English does believe that you can have some &#8220;go-to&#8221; topics before you walk into the exam, it is not realistic to assume that your standardized answers will easily fit for any question you get.</p>
<p>For example, one standard topic that can work for many questions is &#8220;BODY&#8221;.  So let&#8217;s imagine that a student has memorized the idea of talking about BODY. That is GOOD. It will probably help them come up with an answer. But let&#8217;s take this a step further and say that they have memorized one very specific positive body answer and one very specific negative body answer. The positive body answer is, &#8220;It keeps me fit&#8221; and the negative body answer is &#8220;It might hurt me&#8221;. So let&#8217;s look at five possible questions on either Task 2 or on the Independent Essay and see how many of them we can use these standard answers of STAY FIT and HURT MYSELF for.</p>
<p>QUESTION: Should children be required to take gym class in high school?</p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;">POS: I believe that children should be required to take gym class in high school because it helps them stay fit.</p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;">NEG: I believe that children should not be required to take gym class in high school because they could hurt themselves.</p>
<p>We were lucky here, because GYM CLASS is already about BODY, so our general catch-all answers work. But we&#8217;ll still have to explain specifically HOW children might hurt themselves. And that hurt must be SPECIFIC for each prompt&#8217;s situation. At this level of detail a standard answer is no longer possible. For example, let&#8217;s imagine our more detailed standard answer is &#8220;IT WILL HURT YOUR BACK.&#8221;  Will it work in every question? Let&#8217;s see:</p>
<p>QUESTION: &#8220;Do you agree with the statement that owning your own home is better than renting an apartment?&#8221;</p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;">ANSWER: I do not agree that owning my own home is better than renting an apartment because home ownership hurts my back.</p>
<p>At first glance, this sounds silly. Millions of people own homes and 99% of them do not have a bad back. And if they DO have a bad back, it is not BECAUSE of home ownership. Now, BAD BACK can still be used to answer this question, but we have to introduce that concept in a way that is unique to the question.</p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;">REVISED ANSWER: I do not agree that owning my own home is better than renting an apartment because home ownership requires more physical labor, which might hurt my back.</p>
<p>This is better, but now we have to explain WHAT KIND OF PHYSICAL LABOR hurts the back. Gardening? Shoveling snow? Raking Leaves? Mowing the Lawn?  Again, at this level of detail, whatever answer we come up with, won&#8217;t work for another answer. Sure shoveling snow can hurt your back, but we can&#8217;t use that for an answer to a prompt like:</p>
<p>QUESTION: &#8220;Is it better to wear glasses or contact lenses?&#8221;</p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;">I think it is better to wear glasses because I will not hurt my back while shoveling snow.</p>
<p>I hope you can see that this answer is TERRIBLE. And we seriously get students who try to answer with these kinds of memorized answers. Now please note that BODY is still a good topic, and even HURT is still a good idea. For example,</p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;">I prefer glasses because contacts can infect my eyes.</p>
<p>Now the good thing is that HURT is still our answer, but the bad thing is that we still had to come up with a hurt that was SPECIFIC to contact lenses (an infection).</p>
<p>Please remember that the directions for both the Speaking and the Writing on the iBT say to give &#8220;reasons and examples&#8221; to support your opinion. These reasons and examples must be specific and relevant to the prompt.</p>
<p>Of course, you can say, &#8220;well, I&#8217;ll just memorize 10 different kinds of hurt&#8221;, but I hope you can see that what we&#8217;ve shown here will just happen again.  If you memorized 10 kinds of hurt, then you&#8217;ll get a prompt that needs an 11th type of hurt. If you memorize 100 types of bodily injury, then you will get a prompt that requires a 101st type of bodily injury.</p>
<p>Trust us when we say: It is not possible to memorize enough answers.</p>
<p>And on a broader picture. Is this really how you want to be preparing for your college career? I hope you understand that you cannot memorize your way through the American university system.  Sure, you need to memorize many facts in, say, an organic chemistry class. But most of your classes will evaluate you on your ability to think critically and your ability to synthesize new ideas from existing information. Therefore, you might as well begin learning how to do this NOW.</p>
<p>So, in conclusion: Yes, Strictly English encourages you to memorize some GENERAL TOPICS, but we do NOT encourage you to memorize specific details. Instead, you need to learn lateral thinking skills, critical thinking skills, and the ability to synthesize information. These skills are really only taught in university. It&#8217;s what differentiates university from high school. Therefore, you really need to be working with Strictly English tutors, all of which have their Ph.D.s and work at a university.</p>
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		<title>Video Testimonial: Score 104. Speaking 27</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 16 Mar 2010 03:24:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>Strictly English on FaceBook!</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 14 Mar 2010 14:23:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Strictly English has now launched a FaceBook page called TOEFL 101.  There are a lot of great discussions on it.  Post questions about iBT Reading, Listening, Writing, Speaking, and we&#8217;ll answer those questions within 12 hours!  See you there!
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Strictly English has now launched a FaceBook page called <a href="http://www.facebook.com/pages/TOEFL-101/394394113474">TOEFL 101</a>.  There are a lot of great discussions on it.  Post questions about iBT Reading, Listening, Writing, Speaking, and we&#8217;ll answer those questions within 12 hours!  See you there!</p>
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		<title>Video on TOEFL 20-Minute Essay (Integrated Essay)</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Dec 2009 03:05:58 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Here is Strictly English&#8217;s first instructional video. It covers the TOEFL 20-Minute essay, or what is technically named &#8220;The Integrated Skills Essay&#8221;.  This video tells you things about the 20-Minute essay that other schools and books are not telling you about the essay&#8217;s format!
Want to learn how to write a more powerful TOEFL essay, begin [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Here is Strictly English&#8217;s first instructional video. It covers the TOEFL 20-Minute essay, or what is technically named &#8220;The Integrated Skills Essay&#8221;.  This video tells you things about the 20-Minute essay that other schools and books are not telling you about the essay&#8217;s format!</p>
<p>Want to learn how to write a more powerful TOEFL essay, begin by watching this video!</p>
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		<title>Using your TOEFL Skills Beyond TOEFL</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 23 Oct 2009 13:54:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[M. K. Thompson has a very compelling article titled The Many Shortcomings of Standardized Tests in the Korean Herald today.  In it, she argues that the information you learn when studying for any standardized test is only good for the test itself.  Most students do not apply the knowledge they learn for the test to [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>M. K. Thompson has a very compelling article titled <a href="http://www.koreaherald.co.kr/NEWKHSITE/data/html_dir/2009/10/23/200910230047.asp">The Many Shortcomings of Standardized Tests</a> in the <a href="http://www.koreaherald.co.kr/">Korean Herald</a> today.  In it, she argues that the information you learn when studying for any standardized test is only good for the test itself.  Most students do not apply the knowledge they learn for the test to other academic situations.  As a university tester for more than 15 years, I completely agree with Ms. Thompson.</p>
<p>This is why Strictly English has designed a TOEFL program that can be directly applied to university life.  Our methods and strategies will be helpful when writing university essays and when giving oral presentations in your university classes.</p>
<p>Case in point: during the Spring 2009 semester, Strictly English received a phone call from an ex-student who has already completed her TOEFL study and was now at college taking a history class.  She called requesting help with her midterm essay. Although Strictly English does not regularly offer academic tutoring, I did take the time to meet with this ex-student to show her how all of Strictly English&#8217;s strategies for the 30-Minute essay could be applied to her college midterm paper.</p>
<p>Not only did she get an A- on that paper, but that grade was significantly higher than the other essays she had written without the Strictly English method!</p>
<p>So remember: a good TOEFL tutor will give you skills that go far beyond the test!</p>
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		<title>Kind Words from a Friend of Strictly English</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 11 Jul 2009 00:38:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I would like to thank you for the tips on the speaking section, and also for leting me know that the integrated writing had changed. I did not have a lot of time for studying these changes, but I did have some time to search the ETS website for some examples of level 5 essays.
Again, [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I would like to thank you for the tips on the speaking section, and also for leting me know that the integrated writing had changed. I did not have a lot of time for studying these changes, but I did have some time to search the ETS website for some examples of level 5 essays.</p>
<p>Again, thanks a lot for helping me achieve this score.</p>
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		<title>Strictly English will Launch TOEFL Videos July 15th!</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[Strictly English has been working on a series of HOW TO videos about the TOEFL test.  For example:
How to sign up at ETS.
How to register for the TOEFL.
How to View your TOEFL results online.
We will also be making videos that will help you improve your TOEFL English!
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Strictly English has been working on a series of HOW TO videos about the TOEFL test.  For example:<br />
How to sign up at ETS.<br />
How to register for the TOEFL.<br />
How to View your TOEFL results online.</p>
<p>We will also be making videos that will help you improve your TOEFL English!</p>
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		<title>Test Taker&#8217;s Feedback</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 14 Jun 2009 14:32:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Hi Jon!
Sorry for taking so long to get back to you!
I did my exam ok and I feel quite comfortable with what I have done! 
To be honest, the it was a little bit tougher than I thought.  The reading I did well. I knew most of the words so I&#8217;m quite happy with [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Jon!<br />
Sorry for taking so long to get back to you!</p>
<p>I did my exam ok and I feel quite comfortable with what I have done! </p>
<p>To be honest, the it was a little bit tougher than I thought.  The reading I did well. I knew most of the words so I&#8217;m quite happy with that! The listening was faster and longer than I expected!  The speaking section, I think I did better than ever, I tried to remember what you told me about &#8220;pace myself, take a short breath between sentences ..&#8221; I felt really calm and seemed not to be nervous at all. So, I answered all the 6 questions quite well. Thank you for that.</p>
<p>Writing was a little bit rushed, I was running out of time but still finished everything, including proof-reading!  I wrote quite a lot, about > 350 words for the second essay. </p>
<p>Again, thanks for your help during the time I practiced. you have been a great help for me.! God blesses you!<br />
Hope you are having a nice weekend!</p>
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		<title>Grammar vs. Essay Structure</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 10 Jun 2009 12:25:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[It is hard to say definitively if your Grammar or your Essay&#8217;s Structure will count more toward your TOEFL score.  Officially, ETS says that the score is &#8220;integrated&#8221;, which means that it counts all aspects of communication equally. Yet, if you make really basic grammar errors, then it won&#8217;t matter how great your essay&#8217;s structure [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It is hard to say definitively if your Grammar or your Essay&#8217;s Structure will count more toward your TOEFL score.  Officially, ETS says that the score is &#8220;integrated&#8221;, which means that it counts all aspects of communication equally. Yet, if you make really basic grammar errors, then it won&#8217;t matter how great your essay&#8217;s structure is.  Here&#8217;s what I do know: an essay with perfect structure, and perfect **Intermediate-Level English** can score 29 (you don&#8217;t need Advanced English grammar to get a high score), but an essay with perfect structure and Intermediate-Level English that has consistent Subject-Verb agreement errors will drop down to a 22. That&#8217;s a loss of 7 points just because you repeatedly wrote sentences like, &#8220;he go&#8221;, &#8220;it give&#8221;, &#8220;she have&#8221; instead of &#8220;he goES&#8221;, &#8220;it giveS&#8221;, &#8220;she haS&#8221;.  So be very careful with grammar. It Counts!</p>
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		<title>20-Minute Essay Conclusion</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 03 Apr 2009 20:12:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Because the 20-minutes essay is only a summary and not an argument, it does not need a conclusion. Therefore, don&#8217;t waste precious time on a conclusion. Spend that time proofreading instead!

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